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I've told u over and oer,
I love you,
Yes you should know by now,
It's true,
Because let me tell you,
I swear I do,
I mean whats not to love?
Brown hair fixed up nice,
That I can mess up just so you,
can fix it again,
You don't care you like it,
You like the feel of my hand on your skin,
Every time I poke your arm,
You fall so I catch you,
You laugh when I laugh,
What's not to love?
Your smile, to me,
Makes the sun look dim,
Your laugh is better,
Than hearing a thousand birds sing,
And still you protest mine is better,
You never cease to amaze,
Of course sometimes I have to,
Remind you to obey,
But hey,
What's not to love?
You hold me close,
When we embrace,
Sometimes I hate to let go,
But when my moms there waiting,
I guess it's not really,
Up to me,
So I'll smile and wave,
Than walk away,
And wait till I see you again,
So tell me What's not to love?
Is it that fact that he laughs when I fall,
Is it the reason why you don't think he's good enough,
Or is it because of the way he rejects you so coldly,
Well get this,
I understand the reasons why he says no,
To your kindly asked Pruposes,
It's because he's waiting for me,
Or because he just can't date,
But maybe it's just because,
Of your hate.
So tell me,
Is that the reason,
Why I can't love?
©2007-2010 ~Oblivionskey
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:icongogetass4:
I love it. It gets kinda confusing at the bottom, I can't tell who you're talking about there, but I love it. It's the feeling that counts! And it counts to me! :3

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Everything I just wrote is...

Hell, it's awesome.
:iconyoshiki-kun:
O I see....This is about Eric!!
But really this poem is disturbing!!!!!O.O

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You don’t want my opinion…You want your opinion to come out of my mouth!
:iconoblivionskey:
yey..my poem is loved..I confuse myself so I guess thats okay..I need to re-read it...(again) anyways thanks so much for the fav!! :hug:

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I laugh at you!! I don't know why but i laugh at you!! bwhahahahahahahaha!!
~oblivion~
:iconoblivionskey:
no...ur wrong and how is it disturbing?!....come on dude...

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I laugh at you!! I don't know why but i laugh at you!! bwhahahahahahahaha!!
~oblivion~
:iconsky-lotus:
it was nice....wat happened in the end? it seemed sad or was implying that
:iconyoshiki-kun:
Don't call me dude! How is it not disturbing?!?!?

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You don’t want my opinion…You want your opinion to come out of my mouth!
:iconoblivionskey:
I DON'T KNOW!!

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I laugh at you!! I don't know why but i laugh at you!! bwhahahahahahahaha!!
~oblivion~
:iconyoshiki-kun:
LOL its about eric isn't it!!!

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You don’t want my opinion…You want your opinion to come out of my mouth!
:iconoblivionskey:
NO!!

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I laugh at you!! I don't know why but i laugh at you!! bwhahahahahahahaha!!
~oblivion~

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